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models: Kathi & Svenja
clothes: Tolllkirsche
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Given 2008-08-08

.kranke schwestern. by ~pink-calyx is breathtaking. The aesthetic is cinematic and striking, a style that is seen throughout the deviant's gallery. Take a good long browse through her wide variety of styles, as there's something for everyone, from fetish to horror, and even nature photography. (Featured by ^opioid)

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:iconumarachnea:
Well this surely is a wonderful effort.

The poses, the expression behind the masks, similar, yet slightly different, which is then reflected as well through their wardrobe works all together to give this a strange feel. I mean as a good thing.

Although I personally would have preferred the shot to be taken a bit later at night, to have a darker sky still, the "greyish" back drop contrasts well with their black and white tonality.

There is one thing that does not work. The rail behind the models. It is tilted, tipping towards the bottom left. After close observation, I get the feeling this simply due to the angle at which you shot. Instead of straight at the back wall, you were turned towards the buildings in the back right. Which gives this slanted feel. Understandable, but takes away from the overall effect.

I applaud your efforts, as this is a wonderful image... beautifully executed. This certainly works on many different levels.
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:iconkeykeyx10000:
I really enjoy the pose. Even the way their heads are turned effect the shot!

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From dehumanization to arms production,
For the benefit of the nation or its destruction
Power, power, the law of the land,
Those living for death will die by their own hand..


__.,._ (\__/)
(")_(")(+'.'+) die you feckin' bunny.
:iconzjoriz:
Sick sisters? Cool! Excellent poses, great atmosphere and colours!
:iconhalfunicorn:
I love the almost-symmetrical poses, and the way their arms are crossed. I didn't notice it at first (the crossed arms), and I think it is an excellent touch.
:iconle-gab:
Main strong point of this photo? It's almost perfectly symmetrical. Main not so strong point? It's almost perfectly symmetrical. :)

Depends how you look at it.

Awesome work

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:iconstephanusembricanus:
Gute Inszenierungen!!! Interessante Photografien!
Glückwunsch zur DD :)

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stefan
:iconpink-calyx:
DANKEEE!! :blowkiss:
Ich bin so happy. Juhuh! :w00t:
:iconpink-calyx:
Thanks for the commendation :blowkiss:
Yes sick sisters.. my choice of names has never been the best :yum:
I´m so glad that so many people like this pic!! :w00t:
:iconzjoriz:
Well, they do look sick... in a sadistic/fetish sort of way. What I like about this shot. :D

And the fact that they look alike (sisters) and are dressed like nurses -- both translate to schwestern, right? At least, in Holland we've got the same word for both.

You DID notice you got a DD, right? ;p
:iconpink-calyx:
of course i recognized that i´ve got a dd!! i opened my account and there where as many messages
as never before :)
it was so stunning, amazing that i could dance for the whole day :boogie:
tommorrow is my birthday and i can say that there couldn´t be a better present or surprise!

:dance:
:iconstephanusembricanus:
:party: dann mal viele favs und friends :) :party:

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stefan

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Jul 29, 2008, 9:21:56 PM

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